Well I was going on vacation to a place in Mexico when out of nowere my plane was shot down by two fighter jets. My plane was going down hard and fast. I jumped out of the plane right before we hit the water. I fell really deep in the water and I counldn`t hold my breath for very long and I almost drowned. I was gasping for air as soon as i reached the top. After i clamed myself down i saw in the distance an island as soon as i saw it I knew that was my only chance for survival no matter what was on the island. I was really hungry once i got on the island because of the long swin to the island. And there was so much food on the island I ate so much. After i ate i started to look for some sort of shelter to were i can sleep in. But after a while i was almost night when i found a cave. Enough room for about four people to lay down comfortably.
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Great job!
Yu had an adventurous start and now I'm curious to see what will happen next--are you going to find other survivors, will you find food, what will happen?
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